Wednesday, May 11, 2011

Writing exercise

Anne Bernays and Pamela Painter's What If? Writing Exercises for Fiction Writers, Exercise #1-Beginnings

Write ten of your own opening lines for ten different stories.

  • "You're such a cock-sucking, piece-of-shit, prick!"
  • I'd never seen anything more grotesque in my life as what I'd laid eyes on that very moment.
  • Mr. Walker always said I was a fighter.
  • Mrs. Bennet took her time walking up the gentle slope at the foot of the mountain, weaving through the sharp rocks that littered the terrain and keeping on the lookout for critters.
  • This was a day just like any other; the kids were broken off into units playing, I was playing my part as silent observer while writing in my journal, and the weather was gearing up to be a scorcher.
  • Ellie stared hard at herself in the mirror and for the last time, slid her wedding band off of her finger and slowly, gently laid it on her dresser.
  • The pillow was soaked with my tears for all of the drunken men that had shared my bed.
  • He found the old plaid cookbook on the top shelf, pulled it down, dusted it off and carefully opened it to page 342, his favorite, upside down pineapple cake.
  • As I watched his worldly possessions spiral and tumble to the ground from my third story balcony I was overcome with a calm satisfaction.  I did this.
  • Let me just say, for starters, that people with dirty fingernails creep me the fuck out and while I sat in the waiting room of Dr. Wang's office staring down at the absolute filth collected under the fingernails of the child next to me, I felt like the walls were closing in on me.
How did I do?

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